this is jack

First/Last Name: jack lloyd (y not? its my real last name)

Gender: male

Age: 13

Job/Profession: outlaw

Looks: under his helm he has many scares from when he was 5 years of age givein 2 him by his mother who was a abusive bitch,he now hides his shameful face with the hyelm as for protectshen from others,his teeth were allways sharp n he used 2 love biteing things with them,hes a somewhat large kid under his helm is his only work of true art on his body,his eyes witch seem 2 show stars at night thru his helm

Clothing: dark robes and i huge helm coverd by his hood,armor allso hide from view under that a regular tunic for relaxing he allways weres this unless cleaning it

Personality: evil person who hates alot of things

Biography: ok when he was boan he was niglected he never learned 2 talk untill he was 5 n when he did his parentss allways inrord him,his dad 1 of the royal gards died in a house actsiident n his mother allways was just a bitch sents at 10 he learned 2 use a wepen,he had 2 otherwise he could not oford 2 live at all,now at 13 he killed his mother 2 excape from her n fled out of the hirul casel town

Weapon of Choice: Scythe

Starting Place: Kakariko villige

First/Last Name: jack

Are you freaking dense? Wheres your last name?

Gender: male

Well done you know weither or not you can produce kids. 97% left.

Age: 13

You know how old you are congratulations.

Job/Profession: formor exqutor for hirul now a dangurus outlaw

What the hell does this mean? All I got out of that was outlaw.

Looks: avi

Avi, avi, avi, no tell me what you look like.

Clothing: dark robes and i huge helm coverd by his hood

DARK ROBES WOW, what are you a ganon wannabie? But anyway be more discriptive.


Personality: dark he has allways loved haveing the power 2 kill some1 at will

One what the hell does dark mean, and your freaking 13 you dont have the power to hold a sword correctly yet alone kill someone.

Biography: killed his parents,loved doing it,ometimes a nutjob,lived in hirul but now is an outcaset for trying 2 kill the king 1 day has (or is trying 2 get) the tryforce of power

Im not going to bother to read this because just by skiming it which is pretty much reading it sense it's so same I can tell it's idotic. And also the Triforce's power isnt commen knowlege.

Weapon of Choice: sycl

The hell is a sycl?

Starting Place: Kakariko villige last sighted

Last sighted, I dont care where you where last sighted tell me where you are now.

lol
1 i never thout of a last fucking name X_X so who the hell cares anyway.....i can tell u dont ^^

2 just outlaw then thats the importent part >.>

3 look at my frickan avi n tell me what u see >.>

4 maybe u diside.....n ok then
under the robes r a black tunic n some black pants

5 as far as u kno i do >.>

6 a sykl is like...here let me put it 2 were u can understand
~vary slowly~ its a big stick w\ a curved blade sticking out oon the end

7 just Kakariko villige >.>

happy ^^

1. I do use that peanut sized brain of yours to think up one.

2. *Cough* Look at mine and yours and tell me the diff.

3. I cant even see that crap.

4. WOW Discriptive arnt we.

5. Well as far as I know which is more then you I do.

6. And let me put it to where you will understand it's spelled Scythe fool.

7. So thats where you are now?

No -_- Do it over.

all i realy have a coment for this time is on 6......thx i guess ^^

Riiiiiiiiight, anyway fix it.

better?

It seems to be better than before, just work on spelling and grammar. And the point of all of this is to be DESCRIPTIVE. Make the person feel as if they were there. That is all.^^

Sorry Legend, had to it. It was killing me^^

kk thx